Here's an attempt to merge the additional details with the previous narrative:
Week One in the Bag
The clatter of dishes fills the bustling Loft café kitchen. Allan, the sage sous chef, pulls me aside. “Be careful,” he warns, clarifying it’s Joe, the head chef, who complained about my disruptions while reorganizing the storeroom.
Joe reminds me I’m still on “probation.” I swallow my pride; more work beats unemployment. It’s Friday, my first grueling week washing dishes.
Joe darts around, tense as the week winds down. I think his impatience is a coping mechanism for the nonstop stress. When I can’t find my timesheet, he snaps, “Monday!” But he sends me home 10 minutes early – praise from Joe.
Lulu returns as supervisor. She and Joe work seamlessly together. “The new guy will clean the storeroom for you,” Joe tells her. I detect satisfaction; my 5-hour storeroom deep clean impressed him after all. But is it enough job security?
Joe wanted a 4-month commitment upfront. Now he threatens to find someone “more suitable” if I don’t fulfill requirements. So it’s week-to-week on the tightrope. I document life as a dish pig.
Allan and I bond over closing duties and pans. From Hong Kong originally, he’s been at The Loft five years. His sparse words hold meaning. He even wants me to marry his wife’s sister for citizenship and visit China. But we keep it hush-hush from Joe.
Allan makes sure I get extra food every day, saving me money. Meanwhile, Joe’s mood keeps shifting. I argued my case at shift’s end, and he seemed to appreciate me standing up for myself. I think it’s his way of keeping me on my toes. With my experience, I could get hired anywhere, though he tries convincing me otherwise.
After badly cutting my thumb, I wear gloves to keep working, essential to Joe. I sense my growing indispensability.
Allan even offers his nearby apartment to rent. As week one wraps up, I have a foot in the door. But Joe holds the cards to my future as a dish pig on the tightrope.
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